late one night
in the full moonlight
i saw a yin walking
to describe it well
is very difficult to tell
so I followed discreetly stalking
a yin without a yang
is a lost and lonely thing
as it strolled silently searching
it had fallen from a wuji
having lost its taiji
thus into the night it went sulking
there are people who think
yin yang a good and evil link
but that is not truly the meaning
without day there is not night
without dark there is not light
opposites make the obscure revealing
yin is the tranquil
yang is the upheaval
the balance of things changing
everything has duality
opposites of a single reality
a natural cycle of forces flowing.
as with sister and brother
with in us is the seed of the other
finding balance and yet opposing
seek in yourself where all things lie
as surely as they exist I am you and you are I
everlasting taijitu the yin yang entwining
Copyright: 2010, Donald Harbour
Not just one thing and its opposite – everything and all their opposites.
Amazing photo!
Great post!
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Very reflective and thoughtful poem. Fun too…..to picture a yin without a yang
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A wonderful poem on the imporance of balance! Indeed, everything has its opposite.
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Lots of thought and really good word play. And the photo is wonderful.
Elizabeth
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Hate it when I lose my yang.
I like how this turns into something deeper than just a clever twist on the phrase.
By the way, your link at Big Tent didn’t work for me. (I typo’d it “Beg Tent” – wish I’d thought of that earlier and made it my poem!)
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Old Chinese proverb say, “Donald knows how to write a good tale”! Great wisdom in this. I find the photo creepy!
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I love the speech-rhythm in this.
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Donald a nice reflective piece and I love the photo!
Pamela
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Beautiful description of the yin yang, Donald. You engaged reader me in this piece.
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This is an incredibly imaginative poem that does so well describing a yin without a yang. These lines:
seek in yourself where all things lie
as surely as they exist I am you and you are I
everlasting taijitu the yin yang entwining
take the poem to an unexpected, but earned ending.
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Brilliant concept, brilliantly executed. I loved the consistent verse ending with a gerund.
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Feeling and wisdom in this lyrical piece make it a wonderful read – once, twice, thrice. The image, too, is amazingly clever and totally convincing.
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I like the narrative start to this poem. It drew me in.
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This should be set to music! A sitar, maybe.
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nice patterning.
You never know what you’ll meet out on a moonlight ramble.
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Very well written and a good lesson indeed. I think it is important to have wisdom in different places. That is, not everyone can learn through experience, not everyone can learn from reading a novel, and not everyone can learn from watching TV/film. However, some people learn from reading other’s poetry. 🙂
With Love and Gratitude,
The Intentional Sage
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