A poem in the form of a Japanese Tanka.
Grey marbled clouds
rolling across the sky,
on the earth below
life awaits a moist kiss
from nature’s pursed lips.
©2012, Donald Harbour
A poem in the form of a Japanese Tanka.
Grey marbled clouds
rolling across the sky,
on the earth below
life awaits a moist kiss
from nature’s pursed lips.
©2012, Donald Harbour
That’s nice – and very neat! I like the simplicity and restraint, and that finely judged ‘moist kiss’.
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Oh, how wonderful!
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Our area can use that gentle moist kiss about now…Thanks for sharing this enchanting piece.
My tanka is here:
http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/07/wwp-112-tanka-july-4.html
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