There it is, that moment,
That gut felt knot, a pause,
Neither person speaks, then,
You think: “I feel so wooden”,
Dancing violates private space,
You both strain to be held,
But, there it is, uncomfortable,
A suppressed panic attack rises,
The dance floor a grassy plain,
Tugging at your feet, entangling,
No more gliding steps, stumbling,
Arms, legs, every joint, hinged,
A tenuous relationship, splintered,
Your emotionless faces, blank,
Carved representations of dance,
Still, there is something in touch,
A gentle palm resting on the back,
A brush of breast to chest,
A skirted thigh caressing thigh,
Cheeks that show a slight blush,
Quickened breathing, parted lips,
Body heat mixing aftershave, perfume,
In an instant its just you two,
Wrapped in a glowing amber mist,
You both know, together, you feel,
Neither person speaks, then,
That gut burning sensation, attraction,
There it is, that moment.
©2011, Donald Harbour
Don, I am puzzled. A great poem for a great moment, but not exactly what I understood by a haibun! I thought a haibun was a bit of prose and a haiku!
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beautifully captures the first moments of a dance
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Donald, I would guess this is not a recaptured moment, but a moment held close all along?
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WooooooW! You description of these intimate moments in all their uncertainty is perfect. Very enjoyable in an anxiety producing way.
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You describe that moment exquisitely!
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