I can not see me

I looked in the mirror this morning,
I did not recognize the face reflected.
During a dream, or was it reality,
The layers of my life began to shed.
Bit by bit, skin by skin, memory by memory,
They all fell away as petals leave a flower.
Scattered and crushed on the soul’s floor,
Trod over into pulp, into shriveled pieces.
The mirrored person is staring sardonically at me,
A look of wonderment, amusement, or anguish.
I cannot tell, I cannot say, I cannot think,
Stunned by the stubble revealed, stalks of life.
There is a morphing in that callow face,
A presence that moves shadowed so slightly.
It is the bared essence of what I was,
Molded into what I’ve become, what I am.
All the years have chiseled at my stone,
Cover upon cover of fine particles, dust.
It is just a reflection in a mirror, but,
This reflection questions: “Is it you or me?”

Copyright: 2008, Donald Harbour

6 thoughts on “I can not see me

  1. This was engaging, and resonated powerfully for me. At 61, I have had numerous ‘mirror moments’ much like the one you’ve depicted so well here.

    “All the years have chiseled at my stone,
    Cover upon cover of fine particles, dust.”

    These two lines brought two strong visions to me: one was time chiseling at the face in the mirror, the other was time slowly chiseling the epitaph on the person’s inevitable tombstone.

    Well done… 😉


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