Satin

Written in Japanese Haiku form.

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Satin sheets quiet
Thunder sleeps in the bed
Tonight waits the rain

Copyright: 2008, Donald Harbour

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10 thoughts on “Satin

  1. I like ” satin sheets quiet” and the repetition of sounds “s” and “t” because it builds the sensation ot the tense moment before the storm…

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  2. wow. i mean wow. i like any poem with thunder, but … wow. three lines -> three amazing images.

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